【急】在校证明，咨询英语高手。纠正

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姓名：陈小明
性别：男
出生地：广东从化
出生日期：1993年7月22日
学生证号为：
从2006年9月至今就读于从化市第六中学，初三一班。
特此证明.

Hanlong,Chen,male,born in Guangdong,22/7/93 This is to certify who came to number six middle school of conghua in September 2006 to now, in class one Grade three, and his student number is XXXXXX

高手们纠正一下，我这样写，对吗？急呢。。。谢谢了

这样改一下：
Hanlong Chen, male, was born on July 22, 1993 in Guangdong. This is to certify that he has been studying at No.6 middle school, in class one, Grade three in Conghua from September 2006 to the present, and his student number is XXXXXX.

Hanlong,Chen,male,born in Guangdong,22/7/93

This is to certify that he came to number six middle school of conghua for study

in September 2006 up to now, he is in class one Grade three,

and his student number is XXXXXX

差不多了。