the first time when i saw you pic my eyeball almost dropped off

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这句话对吗,如果有错的话请帮我修正一下 ,谢谢!

除过you—your外基本正确,但习惯上,英语语序应作修改为:
When I saw your pic the first time,my eyeball almost dropped off.
或者
My eyeball almost dropped off whenI saw your pic the first time.

good luck! guy!

my eyeball almost dropped off when the first time I saw your picture.

when I saw your picture the first time , my eyeball almost stopped,
当我第一次见到你的照片时,我的眼球几乎停止了。

The first time I saw your pic my eyeball almost dropped off.

The first time 可以起到连词的作用,不需要when了
用when的话,就是时间状语了