初级英语写作~~!

Dear Sir or Madam:

As I know your newspaper office wants some reporters from our school and I really want to become one of them, so this is my CV.
I am a student of XXXX and my IELTS results as follow: Listening: 7.5 Reading 7.5 Writing: 7.0 Speaking: 7.5. And I have several years working experience as International database group manager, so I have confidence about my English level and I am quite sure that I could handle the job.

Best wishes,

Yours sincerely XXX

Dear Mr. Zhang,

I’m Wang Ying from Class 3, Grade 8. I hear that our school magazine needs some reporters. I would like to become one of your reporters.

i am good at English, especially writing.though i don't have very large vocabulary,i can write a piece of good English composition in simple words. My teacher considers my diction of words as vivid and accurate.
besides,I have a lot of hobbies, like reading, watching TV, making friends and writin