急求一篇小学生英语小论文

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小学生写的，简单点的。
还要老师的简单评论

Nowadays,we always do a lot of homework.I feel very tired.I think we should not do a lot of homework .We need to play with our friends.All homework and no playing makes Tom a silly boy.
语言错误不多,单词运用较准,写得还好