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本文以曙光专用车制造厂的需求为开发背景，通过采用系统开发的结构化分析方法，详细阐述了曙光客户和供应商信息处理平台的功能需求，并且详尽论述了系统规划、可行性分析、系统分析、系统设计、系统实现以及系统测试的整个开发过程。根据信息化管理的需求，该系统能够帮助操作人员快速、准确、及时的对客户和供应商信息进行处理，大大提高了曙光对于客户和供应商信息处理的效率和准确率。
Based on the need of Shuguang Special Car Factory, the article elaborates on the functional needs of the customer-supplier information processing platform of Shuguang using structured analysis method of system development and the whole development processes, including system planning, feasibility analysis, system analysis, system design, system implementation and system testing. Accordance with the need of information management, this system can contribute to fast, accurate and timely information processing of the customers and suppliers, and improve the efficiency and accuracy of information processing.
注意事项：
1.注意特指的内容使用定冠词the。
2.句子中谓语没有（动词）
3.时态的使用，被动、过去时
4.实现implement改为implementation。
5.专业术语不够准确。
6.句子不要过长，使用定语从句。
7.句子的主谓宾结构不准确。
8.不要直译句子的内容，意译一下。
9.文章
Based on the need of Shuguang Special Car Factory, the article elaborates on the functional needs of the customer-supplier information processing platform of Shuguang using structured analysis method of system development and the whole development processes, including system planning, feasibility analysis, system analysis, system design, system implementation and system testing. Accordance with the need of information management, this system can contribute to fast, accurate and timely information processing of the customers and suppliers, and improve the efficiency and accuracy of information processing.
注意事项：
1.注意特指的内容使用定冠词the。
2.句子中谓语没有（动词）
3.时态的使用，被动、过去时
4.实现implement改为implementation。
5.专业术语不够准确。
6.句子不要过长，使用定语从句。
7.句子的主谓宾结构不准确。
8.不要直译句子的内容，意译一下。
9.文章
Based on the requirement of Shuguang Special Vehicle Factory, the article elaborates on the functional requirements of the customer and supplier information processing platform by means of system-developed structured analysis method, and amplifies the whole development process of system organization, feasibility analysis, system analysis, system design, system implementation and system test. According to information system management requirement, the system can help operators process the information of customer and supplier rapidly, accurately and in time, in which case can greatly improve the efficiency and accuracy in processing the information of customer and supplier for Shuguang factory.