雅思TASK1作文

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Family type proportion of from each household type living in
pover

single aged %6
person

aged couple 4%

single,no 19%
children

couple,no 7%
children

sole parent 21%

couple with 12%
children
以上是剑桥雅思4 TASK1里的一个小作文 我写了下 发现字数不够 而且写法太单一 求高手给我写下 我要求是雅思5分 不用写的太复杂 重复少点就行
重点是多点比较的手法 付带中文翻译 1楼写的太复杂,我的要求是5分,只要充分描述就行,对比手法什么的多点

The graph illustrates the proportion of each household type living in poverty. From the graph, it can be clearly seen that groups of sole parent and single with no children bear the largest likelihood of getting into poverty while the group of aged couples possesses the least possibility to become poor.

To be specific, the percentages of sole parent and single with no children are 21% and 19% respectively, which was followed by 12% of the group of couple with children. This almost doubles the figures for groups of couple with no children and single aged person, with proportion of 7% and 6% respectively. The group of aged couple has least percentage, the figure is nearly 5 times less than those for groups of sole parent and single with no children.

To sum up, a single individual is highly likely to have financial burdens while older people would less be bothered by this problem.