A happy summer holiday

我觉得zoo太俗套了
可以改为Aquarium（海洋馆）
这样显得有单词量 而且结构与zoo差不多
很符合小学六年级思维
it is a happy summer holiday in my life,and now i can remember the days clearly.
it was one year ago,my parent took me to the aquarium,a lot of sea animals lived in there,such as dolphin,penguin and so on.
the most beautiful thing was that i made a friend there.his name is jim,we study in the same school,but i never saw him before.
so,it was really fantastic.

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it is a happy summer holiday in my life,till now i can remember the days clearly.
it was one year ago,my parent took me to the zoo,a lot of animals lived in there,such as tiger,lion and so on.
the most beautiful thing was that i made a friend there.his name is jim,we study in the same school,but i never saw him before.
so,it was my happy summer holiday
修改了下

it is a happy summer holiday in my life,till now i can remember the days clearly.
it was one year ago,my parent to