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The Traffic In Shanghai
Shanghai's traffic is becoming more and more modern now.However,Every coin has two sides. There are still some problems .such as air pollution,traffic jams .and noise.
It's need to improve. But I think that the Shanghai traffic is able to have bigger changes.The traffic in Shanghai will be more and more unimpede.Going out to travel of the citizens may become more convenient.With the traffic in Shanghai,city will become much better tomorrow. 明天就中考了感激不进了..
Shanghai's traffic is becoming more and more modern now.However,Every coin has two sides. There are still some problems .such as air pollution,traffic jams .and noise.
It's need to improve. But I think that the Shanghai traffic is able to have bigger changes.The traffic in Shanghai will be more and more unimpede.Going out to travel of the citizens may become more convenient.With the traffic in Shanghai,city will become much better tomorrow. 明天就中考了感激不进了..
The Traffic in Shanghai
The Traffic in Shanghai is becoming more and more modern now. However, every coin has two sides. There are still some problems, such as air pollution,traffic jams and noise. The city needs to improve these problems. But I think that the traffic in Shanghai is able to take place great changes.The traffic in Shanghai will be more and more unobstructed. It may become more convenient for people to go out for travel. With the developing of Shanghai,the city will become much better tomorrow.
我的一点小意见，不见得完全正确，请参考，祝考试顺利！
写得挺好，没有错误