挑一下毛病

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how time goes by ! i finished my middle school . i'm very relaxed now ！and we have already said goodby to those presses!!!!
i know i will never achieve anything if ispend time in this way so ,on the vacation i want to improve my english , learning english is worth doing i don't know why i am becoming more and more intrest in english .
i believe i have the ability and confidence to achieve my dream. oh friends please give me supports.

总体上来说还算通顺，标点有些乱，意思表达很清楚，只是感觉太Chinglish

How time goes by! I finished my middle school and am rather relaxed right now. I already said goodbye to those pressures.

I know I will never achieve anything if I continue spending my time this way. So, I decided that during this vacation I will do something to improve my English. Learning English is worth doing. I don't know why, but I'm becoming more and more interested in English.

I believe in myself that I have the ability to achieve my dream. My friends, please give me your support!

presses 改为 pressures
intrest 改为 interested
support 改为 support

i have finished my middle school study
goodbye
pressures
i spend all the times, so on the vacation ....
intrested
前有believe，后面不用and confidence

how time flies!

goodbye to stress.

(i don't know why i am becoming more and more intrest in english.)--I feel my interest in Engli