英语改错(寓言2)

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Now, we are going to do an other simple test, and see what will be given as answers.

Name, a few teacher who helped you during your study;
Name, five friends who helped you when you have difficulties;
Try to remenber five persons who let you feel that you are unique and appreciate;
Name, five persons who helped you in your thoughts and acts;
Name, five persons with who you like spend your free time;
Name, five persons who will surely help you when you will be in danger.

Are they easier? Why? The one who will change your life, it's not a famous person, a rich person, or the one who won most prices, but the one who loves you and who cares about you.

Now we are going to do another(an other)simple test to see what answers will be given.
Name a few teachers(teacher)who helped you during your study.
Name five friends who helped you when you had difficulties.
Try to remember five persons who let you feel you are unique and appreciated by others.
Name five persons who helped you in your thought and action.
Name five persons with whom you like spending your free time.
Name five persons who would surely help you if you would be in danger.
Are they easy? why? The person who will change your life is not the
one who is famous or rich, not even the one who received many honours but the one who loves you and cares about you.
(句子结构和语法错误太多,大概改了改,楼下大虾继续)

没什么问题,我只是不明白你在那些“Name”后面加逗号干什么?
本来不该有逗号的。