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My Dream
I have a dream ,it is I can fly to the sky, dives to the very deep sea, has cannot count money. But, I have to study, to realize my dream. Therefore, I will now for better tomorrow, study hard only then can soon realized my dream.
我的梦想
我有一个梦想，梦想我能飞到很高的蓝天，潜入很深的大海，拥有数不完的金钱。但是，我只有好好学习，才能实现我的梦想。所以，我现在要为美好的明天，努力学习，争取早日实现我的梦想。

找出一个加十分！（经核实）

你的这个翻译，还是太中国化了，不地道

has cannot count money，这句就是完全按照中文翻译的，而且have也用错了，
建议改成have countless money
下面一句建议改成：But now,I have to study hard so that I can realize my dream and have a good future.

1 it is that I could (虚拟式)
2 dive to
3 have countless money
4 have to study to realize (无逗号)
5 now, for a better tomorrow
6 study hard and only then can I

建议写时细心点哟！

I have a dream 。It is that I can fly to the sky, dive to the very deep sea, have countless money. But I have to study to realize my dream. Therefore, I will now study hard for a better future. Only then can I realize my dream ssoon.
这是改后的

My Dream

I have dream. Dreaming to fly up to the blue sky, dreaming to dive into the deap sea, dreaming to have countless money. Yet, in order to make my dream come true, I have to study hard. So, I need to put great effort into my study, and make my dream come true as soon as possible.

I have a dream that i