UC知道大家帮我检查一下这一段翻译的问题
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摇滚乐于20世纪50年代兴起于美国。
Rock music emerged in America in the 50s of the 20th century.
它不仅是一种新型的音乐形式，更是美国的青年人表达他们对世界和人生看法的论坛。在这个论坛上，歌星们唱出了年轻人对民权，战争和和平的态度，唱出了他们对社会的不满，也唱出了爱与恨之间的种种情感。
It is not only a new form of music, but an active forum, where the young Americans express their ideas for the world and for their own lives. In this forum, rock stars sang out their stands in democracy, war and peace, dissatisfaction for the society, as well as a wide variety of emotions between hate and love.
总之，在这个论坛上，青年人把他们对美国社会的信仰与情感给以全新的解释。
To sum up, this is the forum where the young generation defines and redefines their feelings and believes to the American society.
早期摇滚乐的主要代表人物有埃尔维斯•普雷斯利，歌星加诗人鲍勃•迪伦，甲壳虫乐队以及滚石乐队等。
Early representatives of the rock music include Elvis Presley, singer and poet Bob Dylan, the Beatles and the Rolling Stones.
他们都是年轻人崇拜的文化英雄。
They are all well celebrated cultural hero among the young.
尤其是:最后一段的hero要不要用复数?= =菜鸟问题= =
Rock music emerged in America in the 50s of the 20th century.
它不仅是一种新型的音乐形式，更是美国的青年人表达他们对世界和人生看法的论坛。在这个论坛上，歌星们唱出了年轻人对民权，战争和和平的态度，唱出了他们对社会的不满，也唱出了爱与恨之间的种种情感。
It is not only a new form of music, but an active forum, where the young Americans express their ideas for the world and for their own lives. In this forum, rock stars sang out their stands in democracy, war and peace, dissatisfaction for the society, as well as a wide variety of emotions between hate and love.
总之，在这个论坛上，青年人把他们对美国社会的信仰与情感给以全新的解释。
To sum up, this is the forum where the young generation defines and redefines their feelings and believes to the American society.
早期摇滚乐的主要代表人物有埃尔维斯•普雷斯利，歌星加诗人鲍勃•迪伦，甲壳虫乐队以及滚石乐队等。
Early representatives of the rock music include Elvis Presley, singer and poet Bob Dylan, the Beatles and the Rolling Stones.
他们都是年轻人崇拜的文化英雄。
They are all well celebrated cultural hero among the young.
尤其是:最后一段的hero要不要用复数?= =菜鸟问题= =
1、“20世纪50年代”表示为“in the 1950s”更简洁。
2、“dissatisfaction for the society, as well as a wide variety of emotions between hate and love.”改为
“a wide variety of emotions between hate and love,as well as dissatisfaction for the society”
（因为“也...”部分是放在as well as 前面的）
3、我觉得“To sum up, this is the forum where the young generation defines and redefines their feelings and believes to the American society.”一句中and用得过多.
我不太明白为什么用“believe to ”
我觉得我需要告诉你，我只是一个刚刚毕业的中学生，我以上的回答不一定准确，请多多包容。