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My name was Tina. I lived in Yingde with my parents and my sister. We all liked music. So my dad often bought a CD about music once a week. My mother usually listened to music when she was working. My sister liked dancing. I often sang a song with my sisiter.
My dad was a boss. He was very busy. So I thought he liked working. My mom was a housewife. She often cooked tasty food for us. My sister and I were students. We studied in different schools. We often went to school by father’s car. On the weekend, I often rode my bike to Longshan park with my lovely sister.
This was my happy family. I loved my family very much!
以下四句为对原文中错误的改正。
We all liked music
My mom was a housewife.
We study in different schools.
I loved my family very much!

My name was Tina. I lived in Yingde with my parents and my sister. We all liked the music. So my dad often bought a CD about music once a week. My mother usually listened to music when she was workin