一篇初一英语水平的作文，请大家看一下

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请大家帮我批改一下这篇作文：
MY FAVORITE PET
I like many pets，like dogs,cats,fish and rabbits.But my favorite pet is a rabbit.
This rabbit is my pet.I very love it,because it can make me happy,Its name is Beibei.It has white fur.I feed vegetables to the rabbit.It never eats meat.Rabbits are peaple's good friends.
My favorite pet are rabbits.How about yours?Tell me now!
谢谢了，也请大家顺便帮我写一篇关于喜欢音乐的英语作文，60字左右，初一水平。
谢谢大家了，这对我的复习很重要，请大家一定要帮帮我！！！！！！！！

有错误的地方，适当的给你修改一下,并且帮你加一些好的语句吧
改正： MY FAVORITE PET
I like some pets，such as dogs,cats,fish and rabbits.But my favorite pet is a rabbit.
This rabbit is my pet.I love it very much,because it can make me happy.Its name is Beibei.It has white fur and two long ears , it looks very lovely.I feed vegetables to the rabbit and it never eats meat.Rabbits are peoples' good friends.
I like rabbits best.Do you think them cute ?How about yours ?Please tell me some about your favorite ainimals now!

你没有奖励分啊！

第3行后面应该是people吧 这篇作文还可以啊 我觉得你还可以说更多的喜欢兔子的理由啊 像it really cute.还有就是你这篇文章的前后两段句型有点单一,最后一段的My favorite pet are rabbits可改成i like rabbits best.how about you?please tell me about your favorite pet.
作文我就不写了....懒啊...

文章不错，希望音乐的文章，如下：

I love music.I always listen to the music.I often sing some songs.The music lets me feel comfortable and happy.It is a good friend of me.I can also play the piano.I always play with it.