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Michael was gong, at the beginning,it just shock me,and I don’t feel upset,but until yesterday I found out the vcd when dad bought almost 10 years ago.I saw the he sing “you are not along” with deeply eyes,I saw he sing the “song of earth” with the outbrust emotion from bottom of himself….. I cry out,with no preparation. He’s gone and he never came back.

These days, I don’t feel good ,really! Everyday I brought the negatve emotion to this so called “work place” .There is only one word in my mind: salary.When can I get my salary? When can I get my fucking salary!I totally can’t concentrate to the job,honestly,I don’t like this pipe,the elbow,…..oh…just fuck it! It should be a tough fight waitting for me,and I’m on it!

There are some disasters happened everyday,lots people die,do you think the god is fair?No, in this world ,there’s no fair.So,I don’t think longevity is a good thing.

By the way,I wanna appreciate my Mom and Dad and the friends who conc

oh my God!错成这样也不容易。
Michael was gone, in the beginning,it just shocked me,but I didn’t feel upset. It changed in yesterday when I found a vcd which dad bought almost 10 years ago.I saw the he singing “you are not alone” with deeply eyes,I saw he singing “song of earth” with the emotion outburst from the bottom of his heart….. I crid out,with no preparation. He’s gone and will never came back.

In these days, I don’t feel good ,really! Everyday I brought the negatve emotion to this so called “work place” .There is only one word in my mind: salary.When can I get my salary? When can I get my fucking salary!I totally can’t concentrate on my job,honestly,I don’t like this pipe,the elbow,…..oh…just fuck it! It should be a tough fight waitting for me,and I’m on it!

There are some disasters happened everyday,lots of people die,do you think God is fair?No, in this world ,there’s no fair.So,I don’t think longevity is good.

By the way,I wanna give my ap