一段介绍room的口语，麻烦高手指点一二，有错的地方请指出~~！\(^o^)/

1, "en-suit"多指独立卫浴，我的意见是去掉，或换成"walk-in"，和最后面呼应。
2，"in which there are 3 garderobes"去掉，在前面的"room"后接"with 3 garderobes"即可。
3，"They"改为"The garderobes"。
4，"image"疑为笔误，应为"imagine"。
5，"as a girl in my ages have"改为"a girl in my age has"。
6，"Therefore ..."这句改为"So it really needs to be this large"。
7，"I ..."和前句接上，中间用"and"。

This is a large en-suit dressing room, which have 3 garderobes. They are all pink. It is my favourate colour.One of them is for my summer clothes,the other one is for my winter clothes, and hte third one is for my spring and winter clothes. You can image how many clothes as a girl in my ages have.Therefore it really has a very long walk in this room.I always walk into the room and change my clothes.

我觉得这样好一些，有什么不好的地方再改改~~~

There is a large en-suit dressing room where there