英语翻译，请帮忙改正！

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/15 17:45:57
my name is lixianfeng,thirty two years old this year.i come from henan,has eight years of work experience,are very interested in the job,according to my ability,can do,although my english not good,but i have strong self-learning ability,i am convinced that in the next year to learn,thank you!

My name is Li Xianfeng, a 32-year-old man from Henan Province. I have got work experience for about 8 years. I have enough interest in this job and I can do it well according to my ability. I am also good at self-study, so that I can quickly blend in the team. Thank you!

几条建议：
1.书面用语要尽量简洁，避免缩写。类似“I'm”之类，要写成“I am”。
2.在英文求职信中永远也不要说自己英语不好！否则他们会认为，你自己都觉得自己语言不好，那我们对你的语言就更没信心了。
3.在后面把自己所有的工作经历，哪段时间在哪里做什么工作，一一列清。
4.把自己所有能想到的有利于工作的优点都写上，所有缺点全部屏蔽，理由同第二条。
5.对所应聘公司或者职位的理解。
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很多，很难全部列举，最后，祝你成功。

My name is lixianfeng,32 years old from henen province.I'm 32 years' old with 8 years' work exerprience.I am interested in the job you provide and I believe that with my self-learning ability,I can get through the difficulty in language.I have a strong desire to have a try and I would greatly appreciate it if you could possiblely consider my application.I'm looking forward to your reply.
求职吧？祝你好运。

My name is Li Xianfeng,a