大型英文大赛朗诵组自我介绍（听听大家意见）

Good morning ，everyone! It's my honour to stand here to introduce myself.My name is Zhang Tianlong.My friends call me Robin.I'm ___years old. There are three people in my family. Thay are father mother and I. I think the meaning of FAMILY is"Father and Mother I Love You". Now, I am studying in _____ primary School.People say I'm a lovely boy with a sweet smile .In my spare time,I like ________(例如reading books).Of course，I like challenging myself,so I take part in the competition to become a master of a foreign language. I like making friends,I hope I can learn from all the other contestants in this competition.Now, I'll tell you a story about______

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Good morning ，everyone! It's my honour to stand here to tell you something about me（虽是“自我介绍”，但换成tell you something about me更符合英语的习惯） .My name is Zhang Tianlong,and you can call me Robin.I'm ___years old. There are three people in my family,my father,my mother and I（这样表达更简洁，地道）. I think the meaning of FAMILY should be"Father and Mother,I Love You". I love my parents and they love me too(加上此句，以承接上面family的含义) Now, I am studying in _____ Primary (某学校的首字母要大写)School. （People say 省去，“人们说。。。”是汉语的说法，直译成英语显得别扭）I'm a lovely boy with a sweet smile .In my spare time,I like ________(例如reading books).Of course，I like challenging myself ,so I take part in the competition and try to become a master of a foreign language. I like making friends too（加上too更显英语味道）,I hope I can make friends with you(加上此句以承上启下) and learn from all of you(虽然是像其它选手学习是你心里的话，可说出来不必说得那么具体，用 all of you涵盖，既得体，又大气) in this competition. Now, I'll tell you a story about______.