查有没有英语语法错误

来源：百度知道编辑：UC知道时间：2024/06/25 19:58:02

If there is a way of sending the mail that I could pay for it when I received it
感觉很别扭望高人指点一下急用

我想这样好一些吧？
Is there any way I can pay the postage when I receive a mail?

第一，没有主句呀
if引导条件状从 (还是宾从？)
想说是否？用Is there

of sending 建议改为 to send
that 改 where (定从)
when建议改as
received改receive

不正确，没有主句