请人修改雅思口语小作文

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帮忙修改下雅思口语小作文。。。谢谢

A Dream before the Rice Is Cooked
A servant, in Tang dynasty of ancient China, his name was Lu sheng.
One day afternoon, he went to sleep and found a fantastic and incredible “happiness” in the dream world. He had been the number one scholar in the consequent exam which was hold by government. Then, he had been given a chance to have an audience with the emperor.
The emperor considered Lu was handsome and that was a person of exceptional ability. As a result, he awarded Lu a great sum of money even married the princess who was the emperor favorite daughter. The princess was very beautiful, Lu was glad very much. Lu and princess host the grand wedding ceremony in the imperial palace.
After the honeymoon, he was designated the head of his hometown. The new couple wet to the Lu’s hometown, the local people pushed and squeezed on the side of the street just wanted to see him. The people who had been treated him roughly before he leave the ho

汗。。不知道现在居然口语也有小作文。。。~
A dream before the rice was cooked.
There was a servant in Tang dynasty named Lu Sheng.
One afternoon, he went to sleep, during which he dreamed that he was the number one scholar in the government examination and was then given a chance to have an audience(这里不晓得你要表达的意思。。~你自己觉得合适就好~) with the emperor.
The emperor considered Lu a handsome person with exceptional ability. As a result, the emperor awarded him a large amount of money and even gave him his favourite daughter. Lu and prince hosted the great wedding in the imperial palace.
After the honeymoon, he was designated the head of his hometown. The new couple went to Lu's hometown, where the local people pushed and squeezed on the sides of the street, just wanting to see him. The people who had treated him roughly got down on their knees to beg for forgiveness before his leaving the town.
While the dream was going in a fantastic storyline, the employer woke up Lu and asked