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一篇汉译英文章,不知道翻得怎么样,请高手帮忙看下,先谢过了。

With the economical development,the energy has gradually involved our humanity's food, clothing, living and traveling, as well as aspects of study, work, production and culture, we all contact them every time, therefore we also have to save energy every time.

随着经济的发展,能源已逐步涉及到了我们人类的衣、食、住、行,以及学习、工作、生产、文化等方面,我们几乎每时每刻都要接触它们,所以我们也要每时每刻来节约这些能源。

In the daily life, we should save the water.When you're washing your hands, face, or washes with soap, don't let the clear water flow all the time, it consumes 11-19 litres water each minute.Therefore we must have to reduce the time of boiling water.So long as we pay attention to each small detail of saving water, like washing the bowl, clothes, and vegetable, it's a piece of cake.

在日常生活中,我们应该节约用水。你在洗手、洗脸、擦肥皂的时候,请不要任清水长流,这样每分钟要消耗11-19升水。因此我们必须要减少浪费水资源的时间。只要我们留心节约用水的每个小细节,那洗碗、洗衣、洗菜、洗澡想节水,乃是举手之劳。

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Therefore we must have to reduce the time of boiling water
因此我们还要减少平时开水的时间
Saving electricity is not only saves the energy ,it also reduces the air pollution.
节电不仅可以节能同时还可以减少空气污染
Switch off lamp and the electric appliance in your family
离家时要关掉电灯之类的家中用电器
as less as possible to turn on the air conditioning, the best way to regulate room temperature is using natural air flowing
尽可能少使用空调,调节室内温度的最佳方法是利用自然的空气流动(即多通风)
You'll find a good many ways to prevent heatstroke.For instance,you may use the ventilator to replace the air conditioning, and it can save many electric powers.
那么对于防暑,你也可以找到很多好的方法。例如,用风扇代替空调,这样可以节省很多电力
————翻译得很好,细节处有三点需要知道 1。尊重原文语句排列,表现作者意思的精准性 2。需要时用通顺的中文连词等连通文章各部分,使合乎情理 3。必要时需在括号内做一定注释,或使中英文的表达有对应的汉语词汇,而不仅限于直译。
你翻译得非常出色,只是一点细节需要润色和矫正————————————————

With the economical development,the energy has gradually involved our humanity's food, clothing, living and traveling, as well as aspects of study, work