UC知道我雅思大概能得几分？
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听力方面，要是没算错的话，应该只错了3个，最多也就错6个吧。。。阅读方面，差不多错了6个吧。。。作文方面，小作文很有把握，估计能给个8分左右，大作文就不太清楚了，题目大概是：Should company and private individuals help the governments to pay to clean up pollution that they have produced? Do you agree or disagree?
Environmental problems have long been the focus of our life since more and more countries have become developed.Since it concerns our survival, we should pay more heed to such problems. Therefore, governments have adopted measures and paid a big sum of money to solve those problems.
Governments in developed countries, such as Singapore, have indeed invested in the environmental protection, and Singapore government even introduced the 'Bring your own bag' campaign to reduce the emission of greenhouse gases.
However, I strongly feel that company and private individuals should play a part as well.We cannot deny that we do not have any responsibility for causing pollution because we are the ones who treat plastics as our favo
Environmental problems have long been the focus of our life since more and more countries have become developed.Since it concerns our survival, we should pay more heed to such problems. Therefore, governments have adopted measures and paid a big sum of money to solve those problems.
Governments in developed countries, such as Singapore, have indeed invested in the environmental protection, and Singapore government even introduced the 'Bring your own bag' campaign to reduce the emission of greenhouse gases.
However, I strongly feel that company and private individuals should play a part as well.We cannot deny that we do not have any responsibility for causing pollution because we are the ones who treat plastics as our favo
你是不是裸考呀。作文写的好混乱呀。第一段浪费了好多文字来说我们应该注意环境问题，题目问的是对治理污染的责任分工。第二段的例子是要说明什么？整段都是一个例子呀，论点呢？
第三段，We cannot deny that we do not have any responsibility for causing pollution 天哪，你为什么要在考试的时候写这样的句子？你自己好好算算用了几个否定。cannot deny，无法否认，就是承认喽，承认we do not have any responsibility for causing pollution.
还有很多小的逻辑错误，Environmental problems have long been the focus of our life since more and more countries have become developed.这是为什么？
全文只出现一个论点，就是个人和公司要对污染治理负责，可这是总论点呀，分论点呢？
语言上，也很不符合雅思判卷的喜好，比如we太多了，I strongly feel这个用做口语就很好，书面也太不正式了，feel就可以呀。
最重要的问题就是，你全文很多话都是围绕着应该治理环境来说的，根本不切题，考官在开头结尾段首段末找不到你的立场，就要耐着性子看完全段，然后发现说的和题目没关系，很有可能怀疑你是背的东西生搬硬套上去的，分数就不敢说会有多高了。
楼上说的有道理，不过你不像是裸考的，反而我觉得你的作文像是套上去的，总的来说7点5分吧，运气差的话只有7分了
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