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the Advantages and the Disadvantages of Living in a City
Many people like living in a city,they think it is quite convenient and comfortable.It's true that there are some advantages in a city.Shopping malls,bookstores,supper markets and retaurants are everywhere.You can dine out with a couple of your good friends at anytime.Hower,living in a city has some disadvantages.A large population flows into the cities and with the expansion of the city,a lot of problems have been seen apparently.Traffic jams,personal safety,pollution and employment are four of them.It seems that something has to be done to deal with these problems .