请英语老师们批改！！！

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/06/24 22:33:06
My name is HuXuebing.I am 23 years! I'm helping my mother.I'm cleaning some plates.My mother is cooking a meal.She is very busy.My father is in the studio.He is patying a lettle.He's very busy,too.My brother is in the livingroom.He is reading a book.He's very lazy.My sister is a nice girl.She is in the garden.She's playing her toy.What about my dog? Do you know?Ha..Look at.My dog is runing afthr a cat.It is very lovely.Today is very nice! I love my family member!

我正在自学英语，我已经学到新概念第31课了，通过31课的内容和前面课文学的内容写下了这篇短文。应为才学了1个多星期。也许有许多地方不通顺，希望老师给予批评与建议！谢谢！

如果只是学到第31课的话，时态还是可以理解的，因为到31课为止只涉及到了现在进行时和主系表结构。
错误有：1.年龄的表达法： xxx years old
2.爸爸正在做什么那句，估计是单词写错了，检查一下拼写。
3.“看”这个地方，因为只是提示对方，后边没有具体的东西，所以只用look，就可以了。
4.after拼写错误
5.member要用复数，因为成员不止一个人。

这个水平算是不错的了，以后要坚持多多练习才会进步！

单词拼写错误和语法错误比较多，语序、逻辑也比较混乱。

不过，我是真的佩服你的决心和毅力，我给你鼓劲，加油↖(^ω^)↗

My name is HuXuebing.I am 23 years old. I'm helping my mother.I'm cleaning some plates.My mother is cooking a meal.She is very busy.My father is in the studio.He is patting a letter.He is very busy,too.My brother is in the livingroom.He is reading a book.He is very lazy.My sister is a nice girl.She is in the garden.She's playing her toy.What about my dog? Do you know?Ha..Look at it.My dog is runing after a cat.It is very lovely.Today is very nice! I love my family members!

语法错误有挺多的哦。。。。你的一般现在时和正在进行时没有弄清楚。你写的作文总是是在用be doing something。这是描写正在做的事情。你写的都是平常总是在做的事情，应该用 do something。

基本上都是时态问