UC知道请大家帮忙修改一下这篇英语作文
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Good morning teachers and students, it’s an honor for me to deliver my campaign speech here.
What comes first is that I have a good ability to be in charge of a union. Besides, I’m good at organizing, which I believe is essential for chairman of the student union. What’s more, I’m always full of energy. Thus, I hold the belief that I can add to an energetic atmosphere in the student union if I am elected.
When it comes to what I’ll do if I am elected, I have several plans. First of all, I’m going to hold several art festivals, during which every student can show his/her best art woks to all the students. In addition, I will modify several school rules in order to make then more suitable for our school. Last but not least, I will put a suggestion box in order to improve the work of the student union.
In a word, I believe I can be a good chairman of the student union, please vote for me. Thank you.
有劳大家指出其中的语法错误及不够地道的地方，谢谢了
（回答
我把改过的文章写上了, 你自己看一下吧,我就不作解释了. 可能有的地方你认为可以不改, 你可以根据个人习惯做一些改动. 我把你的有问题的地方改正了,并且逻辑上有一定调整,还有用词. 当然,只是作为参考.
Good morning everyone. It's my great honor to give my campaign speech here.
First of all, I'd like to say not only am I strong in charge of a union, I am also good at organizing and this is an essential character for the chairman of the student union. Additionally, as an energetic person, I am totally convinced that I can create a live atmosphere in the student union if I will be elected.
Imagine that I were successful, I already have a list of plans. To begin with, I am going to hold several art festivals in which each student can show his or her best art creations to others. What follows is that I will modify several school rules in order to make them more applicapable to our school. Last but not least, I will set up a suggestion box so that it improves the work of the student union.
In summary, I trust I can be an eligible chai