UC知道英语改错 帮帮忙各位大哥大姐
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I was very never when i would know my grade.But i was very sad when i knew my grade.I had thought that i could get a good grade. Maybe too many thing can not come ture as heart thinks it.I did not how to make me happy,so i ask help for my parents,but i did not get a good comfort that i want getting.I seated myself as a fool .
i know that getting a good grade i will happy.But i failed to do it. i know no one can help me except me,so i should make arduous efforts .who laughts last laughts best.i wish i can laught last and best.
麻烦大家帮我改改错误，我英语不好，大家见谅。
在英语中，不要像汉语这样：今天，。。。英语习惯把时间放在最后，如：I am very unhappy today。其实你为什么要用unhappy这个词呢，I am not very happy today。是非常正宗的英语句子。
同样，because，but一般会用在句子中间部分，而不是句首。
需要改进的地方比较多呀。。。
你愁死我了，我把全篇给你改一下，如果你想继续提高自己的英语水平，还需要更多的努力！
I am not very happy today because of my bad examination results.The bad mood has continued for two days.I was very disappointed when I knew my position.It was not what I expected.Perhaps almost what people like will not be able to be realized.I have no idea how to make me happy,so I ask for help from my parents.Even though I did not feel good and I thought that I am a fool.I failed to get a good position to make myself happy. I know nobody could help me but myself,and I should make my best efforts.Who laughs last laughs best and I wish I can laugh last and best.
realx->relax
I was very never(这句话貌似是病句....)
too many thing复数没有加s
heart thinks 也是病句 as I thought就可以了
细细小小的语法错误还有很多，建议楼主再加强下语法训练，此外时态不能乱用。能多临摹一下别人的文章最好。
I am