句子改错,语法好的进,谢谢.

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/03 22:54:06
竞争是与生俱来的,就连小孩子也不例外,而且身为一个赢家,他的背后本身就应该就有批评的声音.
competition is born with a man besides little child,and moreover,it is not uncommon that to be a winner must surround by critical voices.
不知道这样说行吗?to be a winner 好,还是being好??
还是这样好.
compete is instinctive,including little child.there has plenty of person envy of winner criticizes them a lot.
还是这样.person加s吗,including用在这里适合吗?plenty of 可以这么修饰可数名词吗??criticizes用加s吗??

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谢谢回答,好的加分

be born的主语应该是人

besides 除（某人[某事物]）之外（还有)，用在这里不合适。

身为一个赢家 being a winner, 或者可以直接说Winners ...

sb is surrounded by sth

* Man is born with competition. It is true even with little child. Moreover, it is not uncommon that winners should be surrounded by critical voices.

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compete是个动词，不能单独用

including也是要有一系列同类的的列举，之后再including ...

there 和 has不能这样用

person的复数就是people啦

plenty of 可修饰可数和不可数名词

envy 做动词，也不能直接用原型

criticize在这儿不是做谓语，要用现在分词形式

后半句也可以这样说
* There are plenty of people envying the winners and criticizing them a lot.

或者
* There are plenty of critical voices surrounding the winners.

这句话我会这样翻：

People are confronted with competition all through their lives, in their childhood as well. Moreover, being a winner, it's normal that he's surrounded by voices of criticism.

其实当你在翻译的时候，很多时候会发现中文说得不够严