求写英语书面表达,字数100-120

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暑假本来是孩子休息、玩耍的时间,但很多孩子一放暑假,就被迫奔波于各个补习班之间,这其中虽然有家长“望子成龙”的期望,但也是越来越激烈的社会竞争的因素。
根据以上内容陈述自己的观点。
补习班:extra course

All the students look forward to having summer holidays.But when the summer holidays really come,they can't enjoy it very well.Why do they must give up the summer holidays instead of having all kinds of extra courses? It is becauce their parents all hope that they can be successful peolpe in the future.But in the other hands ,the society needs more useful people nowadays.In that caes sudents must spend their most time in the extra courses.This has become a reality,but in my opnion,it is not too bad.Students can learn more knowledges though this way so that they are able to benefit in the future.But everything must be controlled in a number.Extra course also can't be too many.

字数127,有点超了,但也没超太多,写的不是特别好,希望能采纳。