Liu xiang will be advised by his coach how to be a great aportsman 改为主动语态

“Liu xiang will be advised by his coach how to be a great aportsman”“刘翔将被他的教练建议怎样成为一个伟大的运动员”这是被动语态；
主动语态应该是“刘翔的教练将建议他怎样成为一个伟大的运动员”
“Liu xiang's coach will advise him how to be a great sportsman”
注：刘翔是运动员，所以“aportsman”应为“sportsman”。

his coach advised Liu Xiang how to be a great aportsman

His coach advise liu xiang how to be a great sprotman.

Liu Xiang's coach will advise him how to be a great sportman