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  以   My   Hometown -------Wuxi     为题完成一篇短文。

（1）无锡是一座现代化城市，离上海不远。

（2）市内有许多高楼大厦和漂亮的公园。

（3）这里的人们待人友善，食品可口。

（4）你喜欢野餐吗？十八弯（Shibawan）是野餐的好地方。

注意：（1）词数50个左右。                      

（2）短文必须包括以上内容，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。    

                       请你尽量在一天之后给我答案，我有急用！！！    

My Hometown______wuxi
Wuxi is a modern city which is near shanghai. There are many high buildings and great parks here. People here are kind and food is delicious .do you like picnic? Shibawan is one of the best place for it. Yes, this is my hometown, Wuxi.
49个单词
语法基本正确
完全符合以上四个要求
应试作文应该可达到一等文
完毕

反正我有空~这是我自己写的^-^
My Hometown -------Wuxi
My hometown is Wuxi---a very modern city.It is not far from the international city Shanghai. There are many highrises and very beautiful parks in this city.My family always go for a picnic.Do you love picnic?Shibawan is a good place to go.People here are very kind to others and the food here is very delicious.I feel very proud of my hometown and welcome to my hometown.
字数貌似多了一点~都看得懂吧~

My hometown is Wuxi，a modernized city,which is not far from Shanghai.There are lots of high builidings and beautiful gardens in the city.People here are very friendly to others and the fo