求一份英文的自我介绍．过两天要去一个5星酒店面试前台．．英文翻译高手请进

My name isXXXX, graduated from the Beijing Union University.I am professional in network security.
I am an extrovert with passion in my job. I am a honest person and is abide by professional ethics.
I had been working as a cashier at McDonald's for three months during my schooldays and is working as a shopping guider at Converse now.
I have strong communication skills, organizational management,strong sense of customer service and is willing to co-operate with teamates.Beside these, I am good in comprehensive oral and written Chinese language.
I am interviewing in this Hotel today because I hope that I can have the opportunity to work in this Hotel.
Thank you for your patience.

怪怪的。。。好像不十分正式。。敢情您是去大酒店应征？那还是找过来人再修改修改吧。我这都是直接翻译，没什么正式的敬语。

不过，楼上那2个您也别用，是挺专业的，就是语法错了一堆，感觉上是机器直议的。（我真是好人，还人工来）反正我是没看懂啦。

我叫**．毕业于北京联合大学．专业是网络安全．我的性格外向、为人热情、开朗、诚实，工作主动,恪守职业道德．
在校期间在麦当劳做前台收银工作三个月．结业后在匡威专卖做导购直到现在．本人具备团队协作能力,组织管理沟通能力强，客户服务意识