高中英语改错题 急

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When i was in high school,most of my friend had bicyles.I hoped i could also have it. One day i saw second-hand bicyle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money.But he said he could only give me half of the money.He should find the other half myself .So i went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if i showed him the money a month after.He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how much happy i was when i rode to school on my own bicycle.

When i was in high school,most of my (friends) had bicyles.I hoped i (can) have it (also). One day,i saw (a) second-hand bicyle, (it)was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father(for)the money.But he said he (can) only give me half of the money.He (thought i)should (get) the other (money by) myself .So i went to sell newspapers after (不要the！)school. My father was pleased （when） i showed him the money a month （later）.He （gave） me the other fifty （yuan）. You can imagine how （不要much！） happy i was when i rode to school （by） my own bicycle.