初中生英语一分钟自我介绍，急急急！！！

hello! nice to see you all,now i'd like to introduce myself for you.
my name is XX .i am a chinese boy /girl.i am in class X grade X .mr/miss wang is my english teacher。 i like english very much ,because it makes me very happy .and my favourite sport is playing basketball<篮球》.thank you

hi, my name is XX. i would like to introduce myself. i am a middle school student, and i am XX years old. i have many different hobbies, and i like playing badminton more than any other sports. my favourite subject is english, because i think it is fun. thank you for listening. nice to meet you!

也不知道这个够不够一分钟

一下是翻译：
hi，我的名字是XX。下面让我来介绍一下自己。我是一个中学生，我今年XX岁。我有很多不同的兴趣爱好，我比其他的运动更喜欢羽毛球。 我最喜欢的科目是英语，因为我觉得英语很有意思。 谢谢你能听我讲话。非常高兴认识你！

这样可以了吗？还需要加别的吗？如果有需要可以给我发个message

hello! nice to see you ,now i'd like to introduce myself for you.
my name is XX .i am a chinese boy /girl.i am in class X grade X .mr/miss X is my english teacher。 i like english ve