UC知道帮忙修改一下英文自我介绍
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作文如下：
Hello everyone. I'm glad to speak here,and thank you for giving me this changce.
My name is Linda.I'm 12 years old
I think bule is my lucky color. I like Detective Conan best. I want to go to Japan one day .Because the japanese have a lot of good—looking animation.
My motto is "You are never to young to doing things"
_______________________________(加一个过渡句）
For exanple,…………………………………………（许多成功人士的事例）
They are very succes.______________________（我十分佩服他们）
Thank you.
要求：请各位英语高手，帮忙翻译一下句子，再添加一个过渡句。
另外检查本人作文中有什么不妥（语法、单词等）
提出建议。
谢谢各位了
Hello everyone. I'm glad to speak here,and thank you for giving me this changce.
My name is Linda.I'm 12 years old
I think bule is my lucky color. I like Detective Conan best. I want to go to Japan one day .Because the japanese have a lot of good—looking animation.
My motto is "You are never to young to doing things"
_______________________________(加一个过渡句）
For exanple,…………………………………………（许多成功人士的事例）
They are very succes.______________________（我十分佩服他们）
Thank you.
要求：请各位英语高手，帮忙翻译一下句子，再添加一个过渡句。
另外检查本人作文中有什么不妥（语法、单词等）
提出建议。
谢谢各位了
I want to go to Japan one day .后面的那个one day 应该去掉。
Because the japanese have a lot of good—looking animation.
the 去掉，japanese改成japan，Japanese是日本人，日语的意思，你这句话的意思应该是：因为日本有很多好看的动漫吧？动漫是可数名词吗？如果是就要加s了。
。。。。我的水平很烂，只能改到这地步了。。sorry
有几个单词有问题 My motto is "You are never too young to doing things"
__ which also called "Better late than never"and so many people also try to achieve success during their whole life.____________晚做总比不做好___________________(加一个过渡句）
For exanple,()…Laozi and Jiang Zi Ya,they seek for their changce for a long time and become successful when they were old enough.………………………………………（许多成功人士的事例）
They are very succes.____I admire their will.我钦佩他们的意志__________________（我十分佩服他们）
Thank you.
是chance不是changce
I very admire them
sorry ,嘿嘿。其它的我不会了