帮忙改一下英文翻译！急！！

This summer vacation, I read the English edition of ''Cinderella''. Cinderella has a very good heart, but she still experiences pain; this we can't accept. However, she eventually finds happiness with the Prince in a happy life. This story makes me understand that superficial attractiveness (or beauty) does not mean a person has a good heart and that when we encounter difficulties, trying to overcome it is the only way to gain victory (or success).

这个暑假，我读了《灰姑娘》的英文版。灰姑娘非常善良，但是她却经历了痛苦，这是我们所不能接受的，但是，她最终找到了幸福，和她的王子度过快乐的一生。这个故事使我懂得了一个道理：被人的善良吸引不是肤浅的，我们会遇到很多需要克服的问题，只有意志最终才能获得胜利。

This summer, I read "Cinderella" in English. Cinderella is very good, but she has experienced pain, which is not acceptable to us, but she finally found happiness, and her prince to spend a happy life. This story made me understand the truth: was not to attract the kind of shallow, we will encounter many of the issues that need to be overcome, only the will to win eventua