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来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/06/07 11:45:28
the persuit of happyness,one person experienced up and down,living around tough and loneliness,caring about his baby carefully.nothing can stop him,nothing can stop the love.a great father。

happyness应改为happiness
以下是自己觉得应该改的
the person who has experienced the ups and downs of life, and lives with tough and loneliness, but he still trys his best to take good care of his baby. Nothing can stop him, nor the love. He is a great father.