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University should accept equal numbers of males and females students in every subject?
Currently, it has become a fierce debate over whether college should accept equal sexes in every subject. People take vary opinions. Before I point out my view, it is better to look at both views about it first.
Someone is firmly believes that it take numerous benefits to let same numbers of males and females study together. To start with, the real world is constituted by both two sexes so should the school likely to be. It helps students to be better prepared for the graduated life and cultivate them social adaptation. Furthermore, according to learn together, students will pay more attention to their performances in study and their behaviors, which has been illustrated by some investments conducted by psychologists. Thirdly, different ideas based on different genders exchanges in classes help to study.
However, others take a contrary view about enrolling same number
Currently, it has become a fierce debate over whether college should accept equal sexes in every subject. People take vary opinions. Before I point out my view, it is better to look at both views about it first.
Someone is firmly believes that it take numerous benefits to let same numbers of males and females study together. To start with, the real world is constituted by both two sexes so should the school likely to be. It helps students to be better prepared for the graduated life and cultivate them social adaptation. Furthermore, according to learn together, students will pay more attention to their performances in study and their behaviors, which has been illustrated by some investments conducted by psychologists. Thirdly, different ideas based on different genders exchanges in classes help to study.
However, others take a contrary view about enrolling same number
这篇文章只有5.5分，模板痕迹较重，最严重的问题是词汇语法错误太多，要注意巩固基础哦
开头我觉得改写题目不够彻底，能在改改会更好，十天的模板，看的出来，不过用的很不错啊，句式词汇都挺好的，应该有6以上，加油！！
应该是5.5--6分 ，你的长句明显不够要有3个以上20词以上的长句才能得高分。