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TOPIC: ARGUMENT209 WORDS: 478 TIME: 00:37:00 DATE: 2009-8-11 18:56:47
In the argument, the author recommends that Fancy Toy Company shoud ask for Pat Salvo resignation in return for a generous severance package and appoints Rosa Winnings in Pat's place, and the action will make the profits increase considerably. To justify the conclusion, the author cites the fact that in the last three quarters of this year, under the leadership of Pat, the company's profits have fallen considerably and that Rosa, the currently president of Starlight Jewelry, whose profits have increased dramatically over the past several years. Also the author points out that their company has to pay twice the salary that Pat has been receiving.
To begin with, the author's conclusion is based on the assumption that the capacity and ability of Rosa is far beeter than Pat's. However, the author does not provide sufficient evidence about the two. The mere fact that
In the argument, the author recommends that Fancy Toy Company shoud ask for Pat Salvo resignation in return for a generous severance package and appoints Rosa Winnings in Pat's place, and the action will make the profits increase considerably. To justify the conclusion, the author cites the fact that in the last three quarters of this year, under the leadership of Pat, the company's profits have fallen considerably and that Rosa, the currently president of Starlight Jewelry, whose profits have increased dramatically over the past several years. Also the author points out that their company has to pay twice the salary that Pat has been receiving.
To begin with, the author's conclusion is based on the assumption that the capacity and ability of Rosa is far beeter than Pat's. However, the author does not provide sufficient evidence about the two. The mere fact that
To justify the conclusion, the author cites the fact that in the last three quarters of this year, under the leadership of Pat, the company's profits have fallen considerably and that Rosa, the currently president of Starlight Jewelry, whose profits have increased dramatically over the past several years. Also the author points out that their company has to pay twice the salary that Pat has been receiving.
开头段这个要少写一点，不用这么具体。别的没有大问题。如果你是准备的模版，还要练习下打字
写的不错，不过时间用的有点点多，开头段可以略微缩减下。 我觉得这篇作文至少可以达到4分，加油！