英语作文 怎样学习另一门语言

貌似不能说英语，我刚学这一点，貌似是昨天才写过，还被老师当成了范文
I learned guangdong language last year.To tell you the truth,It wasn't easy to learn it well.First of all,I couldn't understand the people when they talk in guangdong language.So I started to do some listening practice,for example,my father and mother always talk in that language,so I began to notice what they were talking,and soon,I can guess some of the words's meaning.And although it's writing grammar it’s the same as Putonghua,but the pronunciation of it was really strange,but I try to make conversations with friends,It helped a lot.

Yesterday we played happily, but there were only ten people. I remembered last year there were twenty-two people at all. I heard some my friends had gone abroad. They went abroad to study. Maybe I couldn’t see them in the future. I think next year we won’t make a party. Next year is a very important year. We all will prepare for the college entrance examination. It is the most important