UC知道帮我的英语作文达分好吗？09北京高考卷
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GREEN ACTION IN OUR CLASS
I am Lihua ,a student in Grade3 Class 1at Hongxing Middle school.Early in the morning ,on April 12th,our class went a tree planting trip in the countryside.
Assiduously as we worked and pleasantly as we felt ,plenty of trees were planted .some students were digging holes while others were putting trees in it.
With the sun setting in the west,all the work have been done.A board said,”protect the trees”had been set up. Afterwards,we took some photos and went back.
What a fairly unforgettable day!
I am Lihua ,a student in Grade3 Class 1at Hongxing Middle school.Early in the morning ,on April 12th,our class went a tree planting trip in the countryside.
Assiduously as we worked and pleasantly as we felt ,plenty of trees were planted .some students were digging holes while others were putting trees in it.
With the sun setting in the west,all the work have been done.A board said,”protect the trees”had been set up. Afterwards,we took some photos and went back.
What a fairly unforgettable day!
有3处语法错误，有一处量词的错误和一处单复数的错误，还有就是有的地方句子的语序读起来不是很通顺，但是总体来看你的作文还是不错的，倒装的结构也用的很好，有些词也起到了画龙点睛的作用，我觉得这还是一篇可以的文章。满分是25分吗？满分是25的话，我给你18分。。不知道今年你们北京的英语作文批的松还是严，但是我们辽宁的英语作文批的都可严了，18分算很高的分了。