UC知道高一英语作文，帮忙看看有什么错误，感激！！
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in the afternoon,my classmates and i had a math exam,my grate is 57.that made me felt sick,i even thought i had no future.
in the evening,my classmates had a party at the KTV. and i was invited.it was the frist time that i song with others .i felt excited very much .i dare not sing,because i thought i cuold not sing very well.so i became a listener,but my classmates did not think so ,they said that my voice was very sweet,fanily i put up the microphone and song a song“i believe i can fly”.i saw my classmates were very amazed.they said that i could work as a singer in the futher.that made me felt happier.
and the most importent thing is that i found back my selfconfidence
then,my world is sunny,and i an see the stars very clearly.i think that in the future i also can be a star
today is a very sunny day,but i do not think so.because it was raining hard in my world.
in the afternoon,my classmates and i had a math exam,my mark is 57.that made me felt sick,i even thought i had no future.
in the evening,my classmates had a party at the KTV. and i was invited.it was the frist time that i song with others .i felt excited very much .i dare not sing,because i thought i cuold not sing very well.so i became a listener,but my classmates did not think so ,they said that my voice was very sweet,finally,i put up the microphone and song a song“i believe i can fly”.i saw my classmates were amazed.they said that i could work as a singer in the future,which made me felt happier.
and the most important thing is that i found back my confidence
then,my world is sunny,and i an see the stars very clearly.i think that in the future i also can be a star
写的很有感觉哈~~~要继续加油啊~~~没什么大错误~~~就是一些拼写の问题啦~~
it is sunny today,but i do not think so.because i