我叫冯号性别男,十一岁,读四年(一)班,我的爱好是 ,游泳、画画。

1L不会是用好记星翻译的吧?怪里八错的!
Hi!My name is Feng Hao.I'm a 11-year-old boy in Class 1,Grade 4.I am keen on swimming and painting.

拜托...楼上一定不是自己翻译的！
My name is FengHao.I'm a eleven-year-old boy in Class one Grade four.And my hobby is swimming and drawing.

My name is Feng Hao.I'm a 11- year-old boy.I'm in Class 1 Grade 4.My hobby is swimming and drawing.

My name is FengHao.I'm a eleven-year-old boy 。I'm in Class one Grade four.And my hobby is swimming and drawing.

拜托二楼的，班级的首写字母要大写（Class One Grade Four）
My name is FengHao.I'm a eleven-year-old boy in Class One Grade Four.And my hobby is swimming and drawing.

Hello！Everyone！My name is Feng Hao.I'm a 11- year-old boy.I'm in Class 1 Grade 4.I like swimming and drawing when I am free.