帮我看个英语短文，挑下毛病，谢谢~

Mrs Xu is my favourite teacher. She teaches me English. She is thirty-eight years old but she looks very YOUNG.
Mrs Xu is good at teaching. Her classes are very funny. I enjoy having her classes and I can learn a lot. (To去掉) tell you the truth, Mrs Xu likes singing and She can sing English songs very well. Mrs Xu likes kicking shuttlecock(踢毽子), too. During the class break, she often teaches us English songs or plays game with us.
Mrs Xu is just like our friends. We all like her. Then what about your favourite teacher?
写的很好，只有两处错误。已经改正过来。大写字母

好什么，外国人叫老师哪有用Mrs，结了婚也是用Miss。

1.“She is thirty-eight years old but she looks very yong”可以写成
she looks very young though she is thirty-eight years old
2. I enjoy having her classes because the atmosphere(气氛) is good and I can learn a lot.
3.During the class break---After class.

looks very young

To tell(you) the truth you删除
Mrs Xu is just like our friend（s）s删除