高手来,下面一段英文,请帮我指出语法错误,谢谢拉

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If I choose, I will choose novel first. My favorite novel is little prince which is a short fairy tale.
Actually, I love short stories due to I don’t have much time to read in my daily life. Although the story is not very long, the content is still interesting and fascinating. Little prince tell us a story about friendship, love, and the meaning of life. That story is not just for children, but gives adults an opportunity to learn how to write a high quality novel within such a few words. Without doubt, An excellent novel can helps people release pressure from study and work. Meanwhile, can stimulate our inner feelings how to close to philosophy of life

If I choose, I will choose novel first. My favorite novel is Little Prince, which is a short fairy tale.
Actually, I love short stories because I don’t have much time to read in my daily life. Although the story is not very long, the contents are still interesting and fascinating. (意思重复,可以去掉一个词) Little Prince tells us a story about friendship, love, and the meaning of life. That story is not only for children, but gives adults an opportunity to learn how to write a high quality novel with such a few words. Without doubt, an excellent novel can help people relax from study and work. Meanwhile, it can stimulate our inner feelings how to close to philosophy of life (最后一句没看懂,小说能让我们离生命的哲学更近?Meanwhile, it can motivate us to discover the philosophy of our lives.)

The fourth line,I think “not just。。。。but”is less approproiate than “not only。。。。but also” philosophy在这里是生活准则的意思,还有fascinating意思不重复,它侧重的是有吸引力的,所以别去掉