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作文要求 写你对困难的看法给你的美国朋友 一百字
Dear Jack
in your last letter,you asked me how to deal with difficulties in life.the followings are my understanding and davice.
Fristly,the life is not full of happiness and sunshine.it always have many difficulties in our dailylife.Such as money, time and emotions,etc.
Secondly, some people says"the difficult is the success's mother "i think it's right. if you don't have any difficulties in your whole life, you be fragile and childish,right?
lastly, i will give you some advice.when you in difficulties. i think you should be optimistic and don't say give up.YOU should belive that you will be fine .well ,so much for it .
Best wishes!
Yours sincervely
Li Hua
分不多 我也只有25分了 麻烦亲了 希望亲们帮帮我 i want to improve my English

understanding有复数 it always have 应该是has time 后面的and 去掉 some people says 应该是say 明言引用错误 应该是 failure is the mother of success you be 中间要加个 will 吧 还是没有lastly这个词when you in difficults 的you 后面要有个are吧 believe 拼写错误

davice.
应该是advice吧
some people says
say
any difficulties
difficulty
say give up
give up
sincervely belive 打错了

the following 没见过用复数的
it always have 错了 应该是HAS
Such as money, time and emotions,etc 这是SENTENCE FRAGMENTS
some people says 用SAY 或者你改成SOMEONE SAYS
“the difficult is the success's mother "这句很CHINGLISH 你可以说 difficulty leads to success
“if you don't have any difficulties in your whole life, you be fragile and childish,right?”应该是any difficulty
you 后面没有直接加BE的 改成you will be....
“i think you should be optimistic and don't say give up.YOU should belive that you will be fine .well ,so much for it .”改成you should be optimistic and never say give up.