求英语翻译自我介绍

给一份一般性的介绍吧

hello,everybody.my name is ....i'm born in 1997.i'm a 12-year-old boy from Changsha.Now i'm a student studying in Changsha NO28 middle scholl.what i'm most fond of are playing with computer and swimming.i like blue most.what's more? i have a great interest in Chinese and English which now become my farourit subjects.that's all. thank you for listening and hope to be friends with you.

按你原文翻译：
My name is (你的名字。姓氏和，名字的第一个字的首字母都要大写) 。I am a 12-year-old boy. Now, I study in Changsha No.28 High School. I was born in Changsha in 1997. I like playing computer games and going swimming. My favorite color is bule . I like English and Chinese best.

我觉得顺序换一下比较好。
My name is XXX. I am a 12-year-old boy. I was born in Changsha in 1997. I like playing computer games and going swimming. My favorite color is bule . Now, I study in Changsha No.28 High School.I like English and Chinese best.

又及：LS的错了。I'm born in 1