大家看下这段英语有没有语法问题！！！

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I'm glad to introduce myself here.My name is Zhao lei,I am 28 years old now,I'm 170 centimeters tall.My blood is type O.I am from China.I am good at cooking and I have some hobbies , such as swimming and surfing on the internet,Because I can learn many knowledge from the Internet and swimming can make me change stronger and stronger!

I'm glad to introduce myself here. My name is Zhao Lei, 28 years old and my height is 170 centimeters. My blood type is O.I am from China and am good at cooking. My hobbies include swimming and surfing on the internet. I can learn much knowledge from the Internet and swimming can make me stronger and stronger!

将句子的结构和顺序改了一下。如兴趣的顺序是游泳然后上网，所以解释为肾么喜欢这些兴趣时也必须按照同样顺序。

I'm glad to introduce myself here. My name is Zhao Lei, I am 28 years old, 1.7 meters tall. My blood type is O. I am from China. I am good at cooking and my hobbies are swimming as well as surfing the internet. This is because swimming can make me stronger and I can learn many knowledge from the Internet!

I'm glad to introduce myself here today.My name is Zhao lei,I am 28 years old and 170 centimeters tall.My blood type is o.I am from China. I have many hobbies such as cooking, swimming and surfing the internet.Surfing the internet makes me learn more knowledge and know what is going on ar