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请帮我看看 这份英文简历语法表达方式都正确吗?有错误的地方吗?

Resume

Personal Information:

Gender
Age / Date of Birth: May 5, 1985
Height and weight:
Marital status (unmarried)
Nationality
Residence
Telephone
Email
Educational Background:

2003 .2 month - in 2006 on institution name .9 Zhejiang Commercial Vocational and Technical College
Vocational Education
The professional name of the food cooking

Language ability:

English: fluent in English or other languages basic conversation in Chinese

Work experience:

Work experience 1:

2007 .12 month - 2009 .5 on company name, Hangzhou Building CANALI counter
Senior sales jobs

Job description: (for the specific job content and scope)
• In addition to sales outside of work, inspection staff uniforms and attendance, daily sales reports
• produced and sent

我以前让外教给我改过,这里给你点小建议:

Age / Date of Birth: May 5, 1985 (后者用的比较多,但是如果是外国人的话不喜欢透入自己的年龄的,除非你是给外贸公司看,而不是真正的外国人,可不写)

Height and weight: (外国人不注重这些,可不写)

Residence (想表达地址吗?就用address就可以了)
Telephone (Tel:)
Email

Educational Background:

2003 .2 month - in 2006 on institution name .9 Zhejiang Commercial Vocational and Technical College
Vocational Education
The professional name of the food cooking
(这里我不清楚楼主具体想表达什么,一般情况下:
2003.2---2006.9 学校 奖项等就可以了,不要出现month之类的。老外比较注重真实性,所以时间最好写到月份)

Language ability:

English: fluent in English or other languages basic conversation in Chinese
( 如果是中国人,中文对话方面的就就可以不用讲了。
Fluent in English speaking,writing等。也就是说要把你擅长的英语方面表达出来,最好写上获得的证书)

Work experience:
(直接按顺序 2007.12--2009.5 公司 职位
职位描述
心得体会

2006.5--2007·····

······以下不做修改了)

Work experience 1: (这句话可以去掉)

2007 .1