英语专业 最好去过美国的进来看下

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/03 22:10:47
Welcome to China,if possible,i can guide for you,not only the delicious food,but also some interesting thing,example, our culture is extensive and profound ,if you realize , you will love her crazy.看看这段句子有什么问题,在老外网站发的,被他们笑话了,我想知道问题,我也好久没有用过英语了。

典型的中国英语。翻译的痕迹太重,美国人喜欢随意的,简单的,自如的表达方式。当然你的用词也不够准确,比如:I would like to be your guide. 你的文笔不像英语专业,要么就是现在的教育太华而不实了。多读英文原作和报纸吧。

Welcome to China,if you need,i can be your guide. I will introduce you not only the delicious food, but also to our rich and profound culture. If you understand China more, you will fall in love with her.

语法和句子结构有点不对,更重要是说法,因为一般不会向你那么形容,如。love her crazy - 爱她疯...等。

Welcome to China!

I will be glad to be your guide during your visit, I can help you to find the most delicious food, I can teach you some of this deep found culture, I can help you to feel the modern beat in cities with 5000 years history.

you will realize , you will love this country more than you can imagine.

.......这个断句。我服了 改成比较通顺的我想想看
Welcome to China, and i can be your guide for not only the delicious food but also for the interesting things. Our culture is extensive and profound, which I am crazy about.

Welcome to China.
If possibl