UC知道是英语高手的就进来！
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很简单的问题！帮帮我检查下这段话就OK啦！！谢谢高手们啦！！
Probiotics ,has been proved as a bacterium which is good for people and animals'health.
It has been widely used in these fields,food、medicine、forage and drinks.With the change of people's life from subsistence level to being fairly well-off,especially after the event SARS and Big Head Milk Powder,people has changed their consume opinion .Nowadays, they are not satisfied with life which is just have enough food,they are pursuing higher life level with nutrition、sanitary|、safety and health protection.Therefore,among 28000 kinds of food,which kind of food can meet people's need.
Nowadays probiotics is very familiar with us,and it has broken into consumers' horizons.Probiotics market has a history of more than one century and formed a industry in international market.However ,the industry is just at the beginning in China,it is not a mature industry in domestic at the present.In order to integrate with the world mar
Probiotics ,has been proved as a bacterium which is good for people and animals'health.
It has been widely used in these fields,food、medicine、forage and drinks.With the change of people's life from subsistence level to being fairly well-off,especially after the event SARS and Big Head Milk Powder,people has changed their consume opinion .Nowadays, they are not satisfied with life which is just have enough food,they are pursuing higher life level with nutrition、sanitary|、safety and health protection.Therefore,among 28000 kinds of food,which kind of food can meet people's need.
Nowadays probiotics is very familiar with us,and it has broken into consumers' horizons.Probiotics market has a history of more than one century and formed a industry in international market.However ,the industry is just at the beginning in China,it is not a mature industry in domestic at the present.In order to integrate with the world mar
第一段最后一句话改为Therefore ,there are more than 28000 kinds of food, all of which can meet ……。就更好了。比 “在28000种食物中，有哪些可以满足人人们的需要”，看上去更合理，更能切合文章主旨。
第二段里多次出现domestic，个人觉得这里如果是介绍给外国人，最好还是用China比较好，而不是domestic（国内），多多少少有些歧义。
当然也还有一些其他中式英语的影子在里面，但基本上不至于影响意思。就这样吧。
益生菌,已被证明是作为一种细菌对人类和动物。
它已经被广泛的应用在这些领域、食品、医药、饲料和饮料与改变人们的生活水平是相当富裕的生活,特别是事后非典和大头奶粉,人们已经改变了他们的消费观点.Nowadays并不满意,他们的生命才有足够的食物,他们正在追求更高的生活水平,具有营养、卫生|、安全和健康保护因此,在多种不同的食物,这一次战役的食物可以满足人们的需要。
现在我们已经很熟悉了益生菌,它已经闯入了消费者的地平线. 益生菌的市场有超过一个世纪,形成了一个产业在国际市场的. 然而,刚开始的时候,它不是一种成熟的行业在国内目前为了与国际市场接轨,关键是要突破瓶颈与发展中市场的. 只要我们采取措施来宣传介绍益生菌,它将会是一个流行的消费品,有一个美好的未来,在国内市场。